Erma Felna EDF Making Sound page 2

2018-07-06 08:56:57 
Shon's inks were more bold and makes characters pop from backgrounds. He coached some of my own inking self-study. I think this where my collection of issues begins to slough off. Dr. K's (however it was spelled) infestation by nanites felt like a superbeing story in the making. How Enchawa will take this opportunity will have ramifications across space. Hence the new computer net OS take on the events to boot.
2018-07-06 11:50:24 
You have an Erroneous semi colon in the title line...
2018-07-06 12:02:28 
I've always liked Shon's line work too. If I could afford him, I'd work with him again.